좋은 의학 논문을 쓰는 방법


 
II. 문 장



1. 임자말에 으뜸 생각을 씀.

    예) The children with arteriovenous shunts had the shunts opened, heparin injected,

      and the arterial and venous sides of the shunt clamped.

    ⇒ In the children who had arteriovenous shunts, the shunts were opened,

      heparin was injected, and the arterial and venous sides of the shunt were clamped
 

2. 풀이말에 하는 짓 또는 나타난 꼴을 씀.

    예) With bilateral leg vessel congestion, the compliance of forearm vessels increased

      significantly.

    ⇒ When the vessel in both legs were congested, the compliance of forearm vessels

      increased significantly.

    예) An increase in heart rate occurred.

    ⇒ Heart rate increased
 

3. 이름씨를 잇달아 쓰지 않음

    예) filament length variability ⇒ variability of filament length

    예) chronic sheep experiments (chronic이 어떤 이름씨를 꾸미는지 뚜렷하지 않음.)

      ⇒ chronic experiments in sheep

4. 문장을 짧게 씀. 한 문장에 낱말을 22개 이하로 씀. 되도록 낱말을18-20개 씀.

5. 대이름씨를 뚜렷하게 씀.

    예) Laboratory animals are not susceptible to these diseases, so research on them

      (laboratory animals인지 these diseases인지 뚜렷하지 않음.) is hampered.

    ⇒ Laboratory animals are not susceptible to these diseases,

      so research on these diseases is hampered.
 

6. 맞먹는 내용을 같은 꼴로 씀.

    예) We found a higher pH at 37℃ compared to 25℃.

      ⇒ We found a higher pH at 37℃ than at 25℃.

    예) Experimental rabbits had a 28% decrease in alveolar phospholipid as compared to

      control rabbits.

      ⇒ Experimental rabbits had a 28% decrease in alveolar phospholipid

        but control rabbits had no decrease.

    예) These results are similar to previous studies.

      ⇒ These results are similar to those of previous studies.




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